I really can’t thank you enough for the love and support you guys have given me. I guess my thank you is the link to the next chapter of this story – down below.
I’m also posting because the comments from the last chapter told me a few things:
1) You’re all wondering about the car accident (the who shot JR bit above) – so I wanted to clear that up.
2) Connections are important. See, I never considered the first section of my last chapter as LINKED to the second half. Incredible lesson learned as a writer. AM I going back to rip apart stuff – probably not – but good information to have. Maybe I use that as a tool to misdirect for effect, maybe I ensure I don’t accidentally link things. In any case – perfect example of using comments/reviews to HELP me improve my writing – so many thanks – and again, the thanks is another chapter.
This chapter is one of those that you’ll finish and say – I have to read it again – so much was in it. I tried to think of ways to split it – but then you just end up with a couple shorter chapters and I know if I get something to read – the longer the better.
If you aren’t following mistressjessica1028 – then check it out and click on follow – she started working on something purely for fun and has allowed me to play along with her. I think you’ll like it. Don’t know when it’ll be finished and I’ll post a link again here – but go ahead and read a bit of a teaser.
CLARIFICATION – Mags’ Secrets page – is not teasers or spoilers. I only add comments about chapters already posted and it’s simply my insight to the chapter, what I was thinking or if I’m in a sharing mood – a story from my own like that links somehow to the chapter. My teasers’s page is a snippet from a future chapter – so that’s a spoiler.
Link to the chapter (thought you’d never get there Mags). Chapter 16 – Damn Lemons
Have a good week everyone!